Talk:Asha Bhosle
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Hi and thank you for contributing to F&F '24! I will begin by running this text through my readability gizmo. The gizmo says nothing higher than ninth grade. That's pretty good. I will now read the article with my brain.
I observe that your contributions to this article look like they might be just under 400 words, the minimum. But this is a solvable problem. The contest isn't over and I have no reason to assume you're finished.
The language could use more simplification. "Is situated" could be simpler. What a "playback singer" is could be explained. Darkfrog24 (talk) 01:03, 20 February 2024 (UTC)
- Hey @Darkfrog24 i contributed to it more then 400 words, I checked it while submitting on CampWiz because on Fountain it shows the total words while on CampWiz it shows exactly how many words you have expanded or created. And yes I'll try simplifying further, Thanks for the reviewđđ» -- đAyesha46 (talk) 02:39, 20 February 2024 (UTC)