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Wiki Loves Women South Asia 2021 contest

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1) I'll see if I can't get that template working today. 2) @Elytrian: Thank you for translating this article for the contest. This seems like a very good choice of subject. 3) I would like to see this article in simpler English before giving it the thumbs-up. It has a lot of words that are not on the SE list and could be replaced with simpler ones: Administrator, various, auxiliaries, campaign, nominated. It also has a few English expressions that have simple words but might not be obvious to ESL readers: "her late husband," etc. The reading ease gizmo puts the text in mid-high-school range (9th-12th grade), and I'd like to see it closer to middle school (6th-8th). Darkfrog24 (talk) 13:15, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

On it. I was just paying attention to verbs in my sandbox. Ely - Talk 15:10, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Is there a tool that filters out the BE 1500 words in a text and highlights the others? Would be really helpful while I'm scanning this for the complex words. Ely - Talk 15:24, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I don't know of one but if there is I'd use the heck out of it. Darkfrog24 (talk) 17:22, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Darkfrog24: I've simplified it more, is this okay? 💠Ely - Talk💠 05:17, 26 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
It just barely makes it. It could still use some more. Darkfrog24 (talk) 12:46, 26 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
On it  Doing... 💠Ely - Talk💠 15:28, 26 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
How about now? I'm getting 6th - 7th grade readability. I'd say  Done 💠Ely - Talk💠 15:46, 26 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]